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Let me know what you think of my New Poem Please: I can't Breath


I can't Breath

The air is abundant with plenty to breath
All around people stroll on, unevenly
I, one of the masses, lost between dreams and reality
no escape from either no way to breath free

The air thinning as the crowd grows thick 
People stream around recklessly quick
I toss about with no room to scream or kick
no way to realize substance no way out of it

The air nonexistent as the herd abandons me
un-constraint masses dissipate freely
I'm lost in nightmares forever, unable to flee
no one to care that I can not breath

You can let me know what you think of my new poem here on goodreads, I will let you know if I make it into the finals!
Do not take my poem without permission, Thanks.

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